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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• " The season officially began on June 1, and lasted until November 30. These dates conventionally delimit the period of each year when most tropical cyclones form in the Atlantic basin" source? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Ok, but it was sourced later in the article.--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "Four deaths were reported, with two in Texas and the other two in Kentucky. " to "Four deaths were reported, two in Texas and two in Kentucky. ". YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "a briefly subtropical storm struck" "briefly"? You mean "brief"? :P YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "Since 1953, the National Hurricane Center (NHC) and National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) used a naming list that contained only female names. Throughout the years, feminist groups criticized this practice, especially in the aftermath of hurricanes Eloise in 1975 and Belle in 1976.[7] However, in May 1978, NOAA administrator Richard A. Frank announced by a list with male and female names would be used in the eastern Pacific Ocean that year and in the Atlantic by 1979, after submitting a proposal to the World Meteorological Organization.[8]" stick this with your fingers into the storm names section? :P YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Nope, I'm doing that with my keyboard :P --12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• " The storm made landfall near the Texas-Louisiana border late on July 23." to "The storm made landfall near the Texas-Louisiana border later that day." YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• David's MH should be cut back a bit. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• I'll see what I can do. Bear in mind that David lasted almost two weeks, was a Category 5 hurricane, and struck several places.--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "(430 km) south-southwest of the southernmost islands of Cape Verde" "islands" to "island", since there could be only one southernmost island. YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Ok--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "After curving abruptly north-northwestward, Gloria became a hurricane early on September 7..[3] " why two periods? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed... :P --12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "The storm was centered well north of Flores Island in the Azores, at the time" Gloria or the system it merged with? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "Mid September Tropical Depression" why no colon between "Mid" and "September" (in the header). YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Fixed-it :P --12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• "The notable Tropical Depression One also existed in June from June 11 to June 16" too sbuecjtive for my liking. What is "notable"? YE ^{Pacific Hurricane} 19:02, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Removed "The notable"--12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

• Thanks for the review, YE :) --12george1 (talk) 19:47, 4 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]